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[Drago55577]

Wops, I ment when we get back

[The Fool]

((I don't think we're going back any time soon. We probably got lost. Plot device and stuff.))

[Svarte Troner]

Yngvar says: "Hey guys, how do we know this tunnel doesn't just go farther from the surface and into one of those monster's dens or something?" He pauses for a moment, "Shit, I don't know what other options we have..."

[Gotdamnmiracle]

((Do you mind checking out a small story I'm writing in creative projects? Id like your opinion on it))

(Sure. Drop a link and I would be happy to take a look.)

[Drago55577]

Here It is, trying to start a suggestion game to....
http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=104000.0

[Gotdamnmiracle]

(So what do you guys want to do? Go deeper or head back? I'm making you go in that direction either way.)

As the group began to walk, a numbing calm entered them all and quelled the gibberish and actions of madmen. Conversation didn't cease, but it became terse and forced. Everyone knew what to not discuss, but the thought consumed their minds. "What was that thing!? Jake is dead! We're all going to die!", all thoughts that were racing through everyone's minds.

The water in the cave slowly began to change colors, clouding up. After a few minutes the water was pink and opaque. Blood and ichor ran over the groups boots.

[Gotdamnmiracle]

Here It is, trying to start a suggestion game to....
http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=104000.0

(I liked it. I don't know that it should be a forum game though. If you want to make it a forum game though shoot for it, I'll join in. I think you should write a whole hell of a lot more of it. Sit down in the dark and hash out what will happen next and better ways than the basic telling to get the story across. Just repeat sentences over and over to yourself, exchanging words for other words. These are just suggestions that work for me.)

[The Fool]

"We're clearly lost. I'm kind of missing the frog pond right now." Andy sighed and shook his pack to get a firmer grip on it. "Let's get the hell out of here." Andy started noticing the red ichor, and nearly gagged as his stomach turned. The blood-coloured ichor dragged his mind kicking and screaming back to Jake's death. He played it off as nothing to worry about, as he started looking around up higher. He tried to avoid looking down at the red waters. He slowly swung his flashlight from side to side around the cave walls looking for another path.

[Gotdamnmiracle]

The flashlight yielded nothing that a person could fit through. The only option is from where the blood and ichor are running or away from it.

[The Fool]

((It made sense up until our options.))

[Gotdamnmiracle]

((It made sense up until our options.))

One letter messes up the whole thing. Where it is running, not there.

[The Fool]

Andy swallowed hard, and held his breath. He felt like throwing up, but he fought the urge to. Looking down again he could clearly see the pores in the cave wall where the ichor was seeping from. He flashed his light down one of the pores.

[Drago55577]

Can't play right now, we're moving so I only have a phone

[Gotdamnmiracle]

Andy flicked the flashlight up the small stream, now fcolored a light silty pink. It was the way they had ran from, and the way that now held a dead or injured creature. The pores in the cave were small. It was odd, seeing the stone form like that, it must be some side effect of the volcanism in the area or something. Water would drip out of an open hole everynow and again, rippling the little stream the group had ben hiking in for what felt like eons now.

(Okay Drago, When do you think you will be back?)

[Svarte Troner]

"I thing we should keep going." Yngvar pipes up. "We're fucked anyway... at least that's how I see it." He mutters under his breath. Not sure of what else to say, he remains silent.