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GamerKnight

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A different form of writing.
« on: March 23, 2011, 04:58:18 am »
I've decided to write a story (just for my own amusement) in an 'unconventional' format.  :P It is about
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And thats about it. Need to finsih Cat and Mouse and then I will start Repairs. Anyway, any feedback would be nice.
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2011, 08:10:09 am »
This was actually quite awesome.  :D
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2011, 12:12:46 pm »
I didn't think I'd enjoy it when I started, but I ended up liking it.  It was different.
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2011, 12:32:01 pm »
Interesting writing style, I wish more authors would deviate from traditional writing.
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2011, 12:43:01 pm »
Very nice. I'd read more.
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #5 on: March 23, 2011, 01:23:38 pm »
Interesting at least, unique at best. Keep it up :D
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2011, 02:42:14 pm »
I'll try to keep going, but it's really hard to write like this!
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #7 on: March 23, 2011, 08:41:24 pm »
Yay! I wrote some more during IT today. The whole running over children thing was dark... I'll probably change it later. But now for tbe urban massacre!
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #8 on: March 25, 2011, 02:35:25 am »
It's interesting to try to pick out the humanity from the bare bones input-output stream presented to us. Looking forward to completion!
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Re: A different form of writing.
« Reply #9 on: March 28, 2011, 12:24:01 am »
What I've read so far is really cool. Posting to follow.
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