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Oakenshield

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Poetry slam
« on: January 22, 2011, 01:01:50 am »

I invite you to post your poetry here. No musical lyrics please.

I'll go first.

The Rhyme of the Aesir and Vanir

7 swords for 7 lords
and 7 rings for their queens
A mighty hand, a crooked blow,
the dart that killed was mistletoe,
Truce is broken, war vows spoken,
A wicked slaughter to betoken,
6 swords for 6 lords,
and 9 schemes gave them evil dreams,
A wizards spell, mightily cast,
Set each upon the other, to the last,
And old Yggdrasil Proud and Tall,
Bears witness spring summer winter and fall,
When Hrodungr the wise speaks midsummer's call,
and sun and moon in line do crawl,
Evils magic power wanes,
the survivors minds break their chains,
A truce again, peace at last,
but terrible damage done,
Long time to come,
when at last, Old Yggdrasil, Proud and Tall,
Shall witness the shades of war no more from their barrows crawl.

-From the 'Yggdrasil: Tree of Legend' instruction texts. Copyright me.

Unlike a traditional poetry slam this is not a competition and not intended to be one. Simply a place for those who feel the need to versify.
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TolyK

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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 01:16:32 am »

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Oakenshield

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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 01:21:16 am »

A damned fine and stirring piece of work there. Damned fine sir.

Tea?
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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 01:33:24 am »

The Lie
Alone
You said this to me in your sleep
CAN YOU HEAR ME SAYING NOTHING?
Ske-bee bop, BOP! Ske-bee bop, BOP!
Bee-bop
...eating though your brain...
Wholeness
Don't pet the cat that way
...beauty, a roundness?
I am sick, and in so being, I am the healthy one
Can you see what I'm smelling?
I am more than dead
...bones...bones...bones...
Painkiller. PAIN. KILLER.
...eating through your brain...
Pointlessness
Like, pow!
The phone is for me
The end.

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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 06:40:03 am »

A damned fine and stirring piece of work there. Damned fine sir.

Tea?

Thank you.
No I'll have coffee and sprite mixed.

I had no feelings about it. It was aloof and liked itself too much, like my brother, Mr. Crazy.
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Oakenshield

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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 02:32:56 am »

COPYRIGHT ME. But yes, influenced by Dante's Inferno.

Inscription on the gate of hell.

Abandon light; Abandon hope, through me lies the way to the wasted land, through me the way to the doleful valley, beyond me the way to the hopeless vale, into the blind darkness comes my path, and into the land of punishment, through me the way into everlasting suffering, through me the way into the dolorous empire, the land of death lies beyond, the path through to eternal pain, from out of me there is no escape, wide and easy is the path on which I straddle.

Minos the judge

And there I saw Minos, brutal judge, wearing an enormous crown, his face livid with rage, garbed only in his long white beard, the horrid beast hurling souls who come before him over this shoulder, then that shoulder, without regard, his blood caked talons slicing open the death wounds and their venoms the cause of ceaseless pain and regret, his tail like that of an anaconda, this huge monster, shocking agent of divine justice, biting off the heads of doubting philosophers only to spew it whole from his anus, down, down into the deep pit he hurls ceaselessly the long line of shrieking damned, no confessions needed, no verdict pronounced.

Satan

Satan! Terrible mockery! Vice regent of the dolorous empire! Three faced, dis, Lucifer, beelzebub, anger ignorance and envy, so terrible, so far reaching his influence. The monster wandereth from mountain of razor sharp obsidian to mountain of razor sharp obsidian, a scaly, hairy body, with riddled with festering putrid blisters and oozing black blood, a long conical tail, and six wings, beating furiously, but no flight ensuing. Into his blood drenched claws any who dares this circles perils must come, into his gore imbued teeth, vicious in the extreme, lies the path of those whom he catches. Vomiting black blood and purple bile in his pain and disease, the grisly black monster's faces red, blue, and ghastly green, covered with warts, scars, and boils, he that in heaven was fairest of all now in his death has become hideous beyond all thought or conception.

9th circle.

O gloomy region of Infamy, doom to the fraudulent, doom to the traitors! Some with their heads upright, some with their heads downward, the razor sharp ice that entombs them black with gory blood, some bathing in the ice to the eyebrows, to the waist, to the shoulders, bend backwards, bent forwards, no souls more fit for the absolute bottom, where the air is so cold that breathing permits no breathing, the wind freezes in the lungs, in the blood, blackened blood forms icicles like those that hang from a tree, the bluish and shriveled souls here do not move, do not speak, like statues they all stand, but their eyes followed after me, such eyes as, if they should have been daggers, would have cut me to pieces with pain, those few who were able to speak uttering ceaseless curses, only compounding their painful frostbite, their pain contorted bodies oozing rivulets of frozen slush, this freezing utter blackness, this nihil profundi, where reposes Beliel, so tremendous and terrible, so unimaginably horrible that I was struck with fainting at the sound of a single toe moving... What I saw there I will not report. Such horror and evil can only serve to increase itself in the mind of man.
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Re: Poetry slam
« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2011, 01:14:33 am »

Nice.

Shade

Born of pain,
Fiery eyes,
Soul of Cain,
Tells no lies,
Skin of grey,
Killer’s mind,
With sorrow lay,
Just one of his kind,
Cougar’s claws,
Mortal’s bane,
Lion’s maw,
Unseen by the sane,
A thousand demons,
Rending my soul,
A million dreams,
Never to be told,
No more time,
To be spent,
No more time,
Will be lent,
Stand alone,
Destiny nears,
Lights go out,
Fate rears,
He stands there,
By the door,
Shade has come,
I can write no more.


I was playing The Darkness on my 360 a bit too much.
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