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Demonic Pancake

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Re: The Morgan Freeman Story
« Reply #15 on: August 13, 2010, 04:47:13 pm »
Quote from: Psyco Jelly on August 07, 2010, 01:45:14 pm
You need bigger paragraphs. Just take a good chunk of it and compress it.
Hey! I like short paragraphs! (I think it makes it easier to read.) And they didn't look too short in OpenOffice...

Quote from: JoshuaFH on August 10, 2010, 07:20:33 pm
There aren't enough spelling errors.
Ha. I'm quite annoyed by people who can't spell correctly. And people who say "could of" when they mean "could've".
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Arkbrik

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Re: The Morgan Freeman Story
« Reply #16 on: August 14, 2010, 05:59:07 am »
Quote from: Demonic Pancake on August 13, 2010, 04:47:13 pm
Quote from: JoshuaFH on August 10, 2010, 07:20:33 pm
There aren't enough spelling errors.
Ha. I'm quite annoyed by people who can't spell correctly. And people who say "could of" when they mean "could've".
But you said it was supposed to be a bad story.
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Heron TSG

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Re: The Morgan Freeman Story
« Reply #17 on: August 15, 2010, 11:48:32 pm »
Dash Gunmetal would have your head pulped under his spiked snakeskin crocodile leather bootknives!!
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