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quinnr

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Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« on: June 01, 2010, 04:20:26 am »

I've been toying around with creating melodies in LMMS. It's pretty fun, but I am biased towards my own melodies, obviously. SO I shall post them here, and you shall tell me how annoying and crappy they are. Okay?
You can listen to them online, thanks to soundcloud.

I cannot figure out how to make it sound different...so just judge the basic melody?

You can ignore the other two songs on there, I uploaded those for my room in Smallworlds.

My Second Track (What a creative name!): http://soundcloud.com/qspam9/my-second-track
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 11:01:55 am »

You want criticism?

That's more of a sound effect than actual music, it's so short. And it doesn't keep tempo, which by itself isn't a bad thing since you can get a lot of neat effects by messing with the tempo, but there's something jarring about the longest notes, like they're either a little too long or a little too short.

I assume by their titles that the other two works are by other artists, then?
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2010, 02:29:31 pm »

Yes. Not my music :-P
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 02:46:36 pm »

Well what is this supposed to be?
I don't know jack shit about making music, but this is hardly more than a basic theme played with annoying synths, like Dauši Baldrs by Burzum, only worse.
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 03:24:28 pm »

Umm..a basic melody?

I already know that it sucks :-P

I'm just looking for tips from anyone who has any experience.
« Last Edit: June 01, 2010, 03:33:25 pm by quinnr »
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 07:27:47 pm »

There is a lot that goes into music, but you can make some pretty cool stuff without knowing too much of it. I recommend first learning about meter (4:4 time, half-notes quarter-notes etc.). This way you won't use those weird slightly longer notes (unless you want to). Then probably some scales and chords. This should give a better feel for how different notes go together.

I never took music theory, so I'm sure someone else could give you some better ideas of what you should know, but knowing this should help a bit.
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2010, 10:33:48 am »

That's too short to even be a melody, actually. If you looped it a few times, it'd be a melody, maybe.

I do have a fair knowledge of music theory, so I could teach you if you pester me about it.
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Re: Criticize My Ear-exploding Music?
« Reply #7 on: June 02, 2010, 01:30:06 pm »

Ear-exploding? terrible music? people saying things suck?
this is the perfect opportunity to plug my one man grindcore band
-[Redacted because I thought the name and lyrics were obscene]-
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but to be honest it was more of a short term project to see if I could mesh a drum machine on my computer with a guitar recorded on a microphone (a really simple riff ) it didn't work so I figured I'd growl at it call it grindcore and see if anyone was dumb enough to like it. I'd like to learn any tips for drumbeats if anyone has them.
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