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[ManMan]

> Tend to our/my hand. Figure out why it's burning and what we can do to change that.

It's about time to check out your hand, unless you wanna lose it without even noticing. You take a look at it, and you are quite terrified: on your palm lies a black, oily and corrosive liquid, slowly and painfully eating your hand. Panic! You run around, shake your hand, roll yourself on the ground, and before you know it, the liquid's gone! All that is left is a burn on the palm of your right hand.

After that, you get back to what you were doing and get into the space-port.
"Hey, you! Where do you think you're going? I saw your little show there. Get over here, we have to run you through the scanner."
Well, looks like you can't avoid the guards. The guy who called you, together with his 4 friends, seem to suspect you of something.

Spoiler: Inventory (click to show/hide)

Invisibility tool (out of energy); unusually big "collar"; bottle of toxic liquid.

[Lermfish]

> Throw the bottle of toxic liquid at them?

[ManMan]

> Throw the bottle of toxic liquid at them?

Oh yeah, these guards are about to learn a lesson. You put your hand in your pockets and-

"Woah woah woah! What are you trying to do? Put your hands up and get over here!"
You are promptly stopped by the guards, who point a giant rifle at your face and force you through the scanner. As you pass, an alarm goes off.
"I knew it, he is an alien! Stand back! Ferion, activate the Atomblaster!"
Uh-oh. This doesn't look good. Luckily, one of the guards interrupts Ferion and supposedly saves your life:
"Wait a second... this guy doesn't look like an alien to me..."
"Ah, shut up Frey! Didn't you hear the alarm going off? This guy is gonna go apeshit on us any second now!"
"You shut up, Hanson! If he were an alien, he'd be acting differently."
Hanson seems convinced. He turns to you and says in a more calm tone:
"Well, let's give him the benefit of the doubt. Tell me, what is your name?"
"You may call me Catweasel." You reply, trying not to look nervous.
"Well, you can talk. That's pretty strange. Listen, why don't you follow Frey, here, she'll take you to a more comfortable place."

You do as he says, and Frey leads you to a building full of people in white coats. He brings you to a room, and leaves you there, telling you to wait. It's a pretty empty room: there's a bed, and that's all you need, because you are dying for a nap.  You lay on it, and you soon fall asleep...

Spoiler: RIP (click to show/hide)

And the game's over! Huh, what's that? It's a bad ending? Well, just like any other SG amirite?
Anyways, I decided to end the game because I don't really like how it's going. I might give writing another try, but right now I'm just unsatisfied of a couple of things. Firstly, I really dislike my inability to describe things, and it seems like everything is rushed, and I don't know how to fix it. The other reason, it seems people aren't interested. So... RIP.

[Lermfish]

Aw. Ace Combat 6 game over theme! In any case, not bad for your first SG. I can dig it. Ping me when you get another project going. I'm big on adventure!

[NJW2000]

Most SGs die. Just about finding the right hook, and story, and format, and style, and - ok, I'm just depressing people.

Still, well done on having the courage to actually post one. Do try again, few people get it all right first time.