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Author Topic: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond  (Read 1067 times)

ProjectXMark1

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Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« on: July 23, 2013, 09:20:57 am »

Please note: This contains spoilers, new players may not want to continue this story.

Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
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Chapter 1
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What do you think so far? Feedback is very much appreciated.
« Last Edit: July 25, 2013, 01:14:19 pm by ProjectXMark1 »
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Atomic Chicken

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Re: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2013, 10:00:56 am »

Excellent writing, love the story. Eagerly awaiting more. :D
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As mentioned in the previous turn, the most exciting field of battle this year will be in the Arstotzkan capitol, with plenty of close-quarter fighting and siege warfare.  Arstotzka, accordingly, spent their design phase developing a high-altitude tactical bomber. 

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Re: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2013, 10:36:17 am »

Great writing  :)
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ProjectXMark1

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Re: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2013, 07:45:38 am »

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it.

Chapter 1 is up, have to go out so I'll finish it tonight.

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Re: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« Reply #4 on: July 25, 2013, 11:00:24 am »

I like the story too. The plot is quite original.
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ProjectXMark1

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Re: Deeper and Deeper Still: Hell and Beyond
« Reply #5 on: July 25, 2013, 01:16:03 pm »

More additions made to chapter one, not done yet though.
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