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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 12: Eve, updated T/F)
« Reply #30 on: October 05, 2012, 11:13:05 am »

Chapter 12 - Eve

For those of you keeping track at home, this marks the halfway point. If anyone has comments about what I've posted thus far, I'd love to hear it--even if it's just a sentence or two. :)
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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 13: Missing, updated T/F)
« Reply #31 on: October 09, 2012, 09:35:03 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 14: Madeline, updated T/F)
« Reply #32 on: October 12, 2012, 11:32:37 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 15: Artifact, updated T/F)
« Reply #33 on: October 16, 2012, 10:02:18 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 15: Artifact, updated T/F)
« Reply #34 on: October 16, 2012, 11:08:32 am »

You are good at this, nice to read a book that is different than the ones i got :P

I got no good sci-fi, so this really is nice.
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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 16: Collision, updated T/F)
« Reply #35 on: October 19, 2012, 09:51:29 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 17: Darkness, updated T/F)
« Reply #36 on: October 23, 2012, 12:07:15 pm »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 18: Daedalus, updated T/F)
« Reply #37 on: October 26, 2012, 10:35:53 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 19: Traitor, updated T/F)
« Reply #38 on: October 30, 2012, 11:57:52 am »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 19: Traitor, updated T/F)
« Reply #39 on: November 01, 2012, 09:35:31 am »

If you enjoy this, perhaps you'll enjoy my NaNoWriMo for 2012. The first day is up if you want to check it out:
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Spoiler: Excerpt (click to show/hide)

This is the only time I'll mention it here. Otherwise, I'll return you to your regularly schedule thread in 3... 2... 1...
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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 20: Spacewalk, updated T/F)
« Reply #40 on: November 02, 2012, 06:37:03 pm »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 21: Triage, updated T/F)
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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 22: Reboot, updated T/F)
« Reply #42 on: November 09, 2012, 01:16:01 pm »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 23: Trust, updated T/F)
« Reply #43 on: November 13, 2012, 12:58:48 pm »

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Re: A Sea of Stars (Chapter 24: Aftermath, *finished*)
« Reply #44 on: November 16, 2012, 11:08:17 am »

Chapter 24 - Aftermath

And just like that, it was done. That's the last chapter. I'm not perfectly happy with it, I know that I'm not so great at endings. But I think it works out well enough. Out of curiosity, has anyone read the Coyote books? If you have, just let it be known that I actually wrote A Sea of Stars before I read those, believe it or not. :)

When I first started posting these back in August, I didn't know how it was going to go, if people would actually like what I was doing or if I could basically be shouting at the wind. There's been a bit of both, but for the most part, I think it was pretty successful.

If anyone has been reading along the whole time and would like to leave a comment, I'd love to hear it, even if if's just a 'hey I read this' sort of thing. I can tell how many people are visiting my webpage, but I have a feeling at least a few people are reading solely in RSS feeds and thus I can't as easily count those.

Constructive criticism would be great as well. I hope to put this (and other works) up on Amazon in the upcoming weeks/months so I'll be doing another editing pass before that.

I'm also hoping to start posting another novel shortly, although I'll probably wait until December to start as NaNoWriMo is still in full swing. I have two in the works that I could publish: The Gates of Heaven (urban fantasy, will probably get a new title) and Shadows and Steam (dark steampunk, from last NaNoWriMo, unfinished). I doubt I'll be keeping a bi-weekly thread like this one, but I'll probably at least post when I start.
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