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Author Topic: The Adventures Of Hognus - Chapter One  (Read 585 times)

Dkite11

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The Adventures Of Hognus - Chapter One
« on: January 22, 2012, 09:40:03 am »
This is my first story on the forum, about a mild-mannered dwarf who eventually rises up above his place, to become the greatest adventurer in the world. I do hope you like it, and that it is in the right place on the forum. Please, any feedback would be appreciated. This story is still in progress, so expect to see updates soon. Thanks for coming to this humble post, and I hope you enjoy the tale of Hognus.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bo-XMStUvs9NcEe70UhXPg6PtNOdlrMBfaop57OI7aM/edit
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Quote from: Chilton on January 20, 2012, 09:06:15 pm
You have been Banished by Armok.
He grew Tired of Your Tiresome Victories, and so Shunned You to the Depths of the World.
Consider it Your New Lifes Work to Appease Armok in Your New Form, that He may Release You when You Sleep.

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Re: The Adventures Of Hognus - Chapter One
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2012, 08:46:50 pm »
Sorry to bump, but 20 views and no feedback? Well, I can't complain. I've seen much better stories elsewhere.
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Quote from: Chilton on January 20, 2012, 09:06:15 pm
You have been Banished by Armok.
He grew Tired of Your Tiresome Victories, and so Shunned You to the Depths of the World.
Consider it Your New Lifes Work to Appease Armok in Your New Form, that He may Release You when You Sleep.