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DrSazar

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Web Comic
« on: July 31, 2011, 12:13:08 pm »
I'd like to get into making web comics in my free time, and so I've made my first page. I do have the finished idea for the first comic segment, but I haven't drawn the rest of it. The text is a little too small to read anyway, so please judge it on its art. Please tell me what you think.

http://www.drsazarstudios.yolasite.com/comics.php
« Last Edit: July 31, 2011, 12:26:58 pm by DrSazar »
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Sappho

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Re: Web Comic
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2011, 02:00:30 pm »
I've got one major critique: the text is far too small. I can't read it. Please make it bigger so I can read it. Then I can give you feedback on the other aspects of the comic. :)
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DrSazar

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Re: Web Comic
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2011, 03:34:09 pm »
Well I don't want to add computer generated text, and I especially don't want to potentially screw up the comic by going over the words with pen. You might be able to see the text more clearly if you copy and paste it somewhere and zoom in on it. But, regardless, this is the dialouge:


...And Bulbasaur, and Blastoise, and Charizard...
...And I think that's it...
Hey dad, what's your favorite Pokemon?
...
HUH!?
"Tommy, I'm trying to drive."
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