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NobodyPro

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Where could this go?
« on: March 27, 2011, 05:31:48 pm »
I've had a mental blank, where could I take this:
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“Aaron you fat shit.”
“Shut up, Cooper!” said Aaron, tired of the joke.
Cooper turned around, laughing. His had what looked like piece of pizza forming on his hairline, how could someone have that many pimples?
“He has a point.” said Tom, so tall he had to duck his head to miss the overhead light.
“Last time I went to your house we had milk on cake, who does that?” said Oliver, scratching ample the ample scruff on his face.
Aaron looked at his friends in disbelief. “I keep telling you, milk on cake isn’t weird. You’ve had milk on cake before haven’t you James?”
“No,” said James, flicking his dark fringe out of his eyes “I’ve never even heard of it.”
Aaron's the main character BTW.
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2011, 05:54:36 pm »
At this point it's probably easier to answer where you couldn't take it. Where are they at, who are they, why are they friends? Answer that stuff and it'll be more obvious where the story wants to go.
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2011, 06:47:38 pm »
Aaron is an immortal centuries-old necromancer living in an orbital space colony. The others are fauns. They fight crime.
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2011, 10:04:35 pm »
Cooper has mild asperger's, and is a distant relative of Hitler.
EDIT: connecting with Soadreqm's post, Cooper must be a relative of a satyr and a man, thus being half-satyr.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2011, 10:08:30 pm by Acid »
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2011, 02:19:00 am »
Cookbook with story segments to go along.
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2011, 07:53:02 pm »
Quote from: Acid on March 28, 2011, 10:04:35 pm
Cooper has mild asperger's, and is a distant relative of Hitler.
EDIT: connecting with Soadreqm's post, Cooper must be a relative of a satyr and a man, thus being half-satyr.

So he's a quarter goat?
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2011, 12:11:14 am »
Quote from: Nine on March 29, 2011, 07:53:02 pm
Quote from: Acid on March 28, 2011, 10:04:35 pm
Cooper has mild asperger's, and is a distant relative of Hitler.
EDIT: connecting with Soadreqm's post, Cooper must be a relative of a satyr and a man, thus being half-satyr.

So he's a quarter goat?

...most probably. His goat features have almost disappeared, save for very short horns and some extra hair on the thighs.
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Re: Where could this go?
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2011, 04:54:40 pm »
Aaron is one of those people who is about 35ish and is still in school. The other guys are schooling age (16 - 18), and are his friends. Aaron only has one remaining family member, his sister, who is doing quite well for herself. Cooper is the prime prankster, Tom goes along with his jokes, Oliver is a contemplative intellectual guy, and James is the quiet emo. Aaron is a nerd.
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