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Zerrer

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The Bloodstained journal: A Dwarf Fortress Excerpt
« on: August 07, 2010, 10:13:38 pm »

I created a world, and decided that I'd write down everything that I did with multiple adventurers, then wrote them in different voices for each character. Some things never happened (Like Sarvesh being female instead of male) But other than that, this is all true things that really happened.

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Re: The Bloodstained journal: A Dwarf Fortress Excerpt
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 11:38:02 pm »

I like how it wraps itself up at the end, kind of returning to it's roots.

Great writing!
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Re: The Bloodstained journal: A Dwarf Fortress Excerpt
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 11:46:48 pm »

Actually, the elephant that injured Cilob was named Ticklord, the same name of the elephant who slayed Ruby. But there was no way that Onyx would have known that. So it was more roundabout than it seemed.
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