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dwarfguy2

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renownedchanneled: the final dwarvern hope.
« on: July 24, 2010, 04:34:21 pm »

it is the year 2495. peace reigns in gostangral, empire of the dwarves. there are caverns completely habited, a grand military, wealth enough to drown an elf, and a new strange metal, dubbed "admantine", has been discovered. so grand is this occasion, that the her majesty, queen urvad, has declared a national holiday. but then...
 the terrors came. they dug into a deep cavern, and instantly heard tortured screams. then, all at once, horrible beasts of all possible descriptions emerged. they flew up, and began their killing spree through the mountainhome. only seven dwarves survived, but not without their... you know... being painfully removed by the terrors. now infertile, these seven fled to a new land, hoping to make a home for themselves. and they called it: renownedchanneled.

these dwarves are:
bomrek, a direct descendant of the queen, who still blames almost everyone else for this mess.
dodok, one of the scientists who thought it would be a good idea to dig out the source of all this trouble. has some medical experience.
erush, a woodworker who has a very strong religious feud with dodok.
logem, an obese old stoneworker who would rather just stay in bed all day then do any work.
zon, a jeweler and art critic whose pretentious complaints of everything aesthetic do nothing but annoy EVERYONE.
udib, the fisherdwarf who always lived a quiet life up until the demons came and destroyed everything.
and iteb, the sole girl of the party who always keeps her head even in the toughest situations. she came up with the idea to settle here.


(so yeah, story fort. what you guys think so far?)
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Re: renownedchanneled: the final dwarvern hope.
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2010, 06:57:01 pm »

"are they still there?" erush asked.
"well, HEATHEN, since a certain stoneworker fell asleep during watch duty, we won't know." dodok replied.
"HEY! if anyone, you're the heathen! there is one true god and his name is rakas goldensilver!"
"oh yeah? well-"
"STOP IT! both of you." iteb yelled out in anger of their constant bickering.

just then, their wagon flew through the air after going up a small sapling, and the wheels broke down on impact.
"well." iteb said. "this is certainly an inconvenient turn of events."
dodok woke up with a snort. "huh?" he said. "oh yeah... hey guys! the demons are gone!"
iteb took a look around. "well... nice grassy area, lots of trees for wood, abundant mineral wealth, river... i think we should settle here."
bomrek jumped nearly three feet in the air. "are you crazy?!"
"exactly!" zon piped in. "the aesthetic quality is all wrong, and the mountain changes from grass to siltstone FAR too abruptly."
bomrek glared at him. "not THAT 'are you crazy'."
iteb sighed, and said: "if you want to keep on running when the threat is away and we have a nice site, that's okay by me..."
"*sigh*. fine. where do we start?"
« Last Edit: July 25, 2010, 06:03:42 pm by dwarfguy2 »
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Re: renownedchanneled: the final dwarvern hope.
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2010, 05:00:36 pm »

post? what post?
« Last Edit: July 25, 2010, 06:03:55 pm by dwarfguy2 »
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Re: renownedchanneled: the final dwarvern hope.
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2010, 05:29:54 pm »

Pretty cool
You might actually need to start it to get some more interest.
Edit your self bumps so the story starts on the first page.
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