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Author Topic: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts  (Read 707 times)

Heavy Flak

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A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« on: June 20, 2008, 08:20:02 pm »

On a miserable dwarfs profile is the following line:

"He worried greatly about not have a tomb after gaining another year"
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MaxVance

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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 09:07:56 pm »

There are plenty of typos. One example I've encontered is in adventurer mode, when you try to travel when drowning: "You can't travel because you can't breath."
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SHAD0Wdump

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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 09:24:55 pm »

What is wrong with that?
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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 09:25:41 pm »

Breath is what you have when you can breathe.
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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2008, 09:47:10 pm »

Ah,sorry,not everything clicks with me.
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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 12:36:12 am »

Also, the "admired own fine bed lately' happy thought lacks a pronoun.  It's just "Urist admired own fine bed lately"
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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 01:46:44 am »

"You strike the Iron Man in the left leg with your right hand!
It explodes into gore!

AHHH! MY HAND EXPLODED!"

I cringe every time I see "It is broken" just sitting there alone. That needs to be clearer.
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Re: A Typo in Dwarf Thoughts
« Reply #7 on: June 21, 2008, 06:12:03 pm »

And when you're playing adventure mode as an elf and talk to an animalman they say: "Hello, my name is ."

They also assure you that they have no family to speak of and that they'll tell you other stuff when they're in their home despite the fact they live in the cave you're standing in.

I understand them not having names and families has to do with the historical figures thing so i don't want to add another ten thousand random animalmen to that list, but it's kinda unfinished. Still pretty fun though.
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