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[SquatchHammer]

Over the past few weeks I had come up with a couple of ideas for a couple of animes and at this point would like to fully write them down and hash out the details.

Firstly, do I expect any of these to be made/published. No, it's only to have some creative stuff come out of my head and allow me to think some more.

If they do get published at all that would be bonus nachos at that point because for starters I personally don't know how hard it is to get something published but I do not expect it the be the easiest. I don't mind help as with Japanese culture and mindset because even though I do enjoy anime and manga, I still have a very American point of view and even though I'm not expecting anyone to be interested enough to produce these, I want to make sure it is more genuine in mind of the different cultures.

Spoiler: The first Idea Title will be The unofficial broken hearts club backstory/character names and descriptions (click to show/hide)

It will be the one about the kid who has a Japanese mother and an American farther that are divorced and that started the situation the kid is in.

1-The reason for the divorce will be stated in a later episode but it's because his job made him come back to the states and he decided it would be better to divorce her so she could find someone else. He will still send out money to help her because he feels guilty for not being able to be with her.

Spoiler: The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club EP 01 (click to show/hide)

I want to start it out as episode one with the kid as a high school student in Japan. His mother owns and operates a classical Japanese style hotel where both her and her son lives.

 The first scene where you see him is where he is in faculty room where his homeroom teacher is crying and he is standing over her trying to decide to either leave or to ask what's wrong. Right when he had decided to ask her she looks up and says "Sorry for being busy when I asked you to come over, I have a request for you. Que opening.

After the opening, there will be backstory shown. It will show the son in middle school at home where he is in his room hearing his parents arguing and talking about how he is going to go back to his job. Why cant he stay and keep helping at the inn but the biggest problem the economy and they need some outside income to keep the inn. He was looking at going back to his old job in order to keep the inn going while things are slow. Cut another year up and you see the divorce papers on the table filled out and the mother crying into a phone.*1*

Finally we go back to the faculty room with the student and the teacher. The teacher had pulled herself together and then asked the student for a favor, not as a student for a teacher but between individuals. We will cut to the student looking at his phone for the time out side of a shopping area while the teacher is telling him in the faculty room that her boyfriend has been acting weird. Usually he would try to see her as much as possible but of lately he distant himself and has not been around and she thinks it's because he found someone else. She is very heart broken over the matter since they were the odd couple that she usually wouldn't date that type of guy but due to his diligence of making sure she was happy and healthy she fell for him. She wants to know who he is seeing and at least why he is breaking off relations with her so she can finally move on if that's the case.

Well, main character finds the guy doing his typical rounds at his job but at once notices the guy is not doing so well. As he follows him he starts to find out the guy has been suffering for a while with something and the mc is trying to find out what. MC is going along following the guy and suddenly finds the guy went somewhere with a woman. At first MC is thinking the boyfriend wanted to see someone else, he decided to confront the boyfriend. This is where I want the half way point of the episode to happen.

The next scene happens to be in front of a hospital and we hear the boyfriend talking about he has a severe condition that needs surgery that has a low success rate. He would be okay with not having the surgery but he wants to at least try to see if it would be successful because he has someone who he loves too much to just roll over and die. He wanted to cut any communications off with her until after the surgery. If it wasn't successful, he wanted to keep her from being hurt. Thats when MC slaps said boyfriend and yells at him that he is hurting her now. The man she fell in love with is letting her think that he is just not in love with her anymore, that she feels like she doesnt deserve him to be around her anymore. It would hurt her less if he told her everything, especially that he rather take steep odds against a successful surgery than just die off.
The boyfriend starts to ball out, tells him that forever he never thought she would go out with him, he was not someone who she dates so he figured he had no chance. He just wanted to be there to make sure she will always be healthy and smiling because that smile is his star that warms him. Finally, MC says that you should tell her that. His teacher needs to know and tells him that she thought if she looses him, she would not be able find a more caring person that she feels like the rock of her world.

At the end, we see the Main character and teacher sitting in the hospital waiting for the surgery to end and find out what happened. Mc is holding her hand to help comfort her and she is tearing up every so often. The MC says he sorry about whats going on and wishes he could do more but the teacher shakes her head and says that she's glad of what he had done. He showed both of them how much they loved each other and how her boyfriend proposed to marry her when the surgery was successful. Mc comments he knew that the surgery has a very low success rate and he still proposed, he must think because you're here now that it will not fail. On queue the surgery light had clicked off and the doctor had came out to say it was a success. The teacher proceeds  to grab and cry on MC's shoulder and he just smiles and holds her while she cries off the stress and dread. Roll credits and on the after credits scene we hear rumors about how the teacher and the MC had started a relationship as the homeroom pulls into view. She announces the rumors are false and then cuts out when she is about to explain the story.

Spoiler: The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club Ep 02 (click to show/hide)

 The scene starts off where you see the MC asking a girl out in his first year of middle school. Then cuts to another and another. After the final rejection, you find out that the MC was doing this up to the middle of the second year with all the girls that were in his grade by this point, with some above and below due to the scene fading to where he is sitting at his desk distraught while there's groups of outlines/shadows of other people talking about him while he is in a brown contrast to show it is a flashback.

queue theme song

Now the scene cuts back to the teacher finally addressing the class and the MC (who is not sitting next to the window but towards the main hall) is just looking off towards the wall because he just doesnt want to look at the faces of his fellow class mates thinking they would look at him in disgust. The class broke out in conversation which you would hear why did the MC help the teacher with such a thing and isnt playboys supposed to jump in and steal the girl from their boyfriend not help them to get back together. It must be a lie that the administration forced her to tell because there would be a scandal.

   By that point the teacher is looking rather pissed and abrubtly told the class that they are being children not believing that the MC had helped her out of compasion not a scandal or lust or any of that nonsense. And with that she is happy to announce that she is sponsering a new club headed by MC himself called the Relationship Help Club. He will be there to help out with any and all relationship issues.

We cut to the classroom where the club was to be held with the teacher and the MC talking. MC is wondering why the teacher would automatically set up the club and put him as president. The teacher tells him that in order to be able to help anyone out that comes to school grounds, doesn't matter if they go to the school or not, they have to go through the club as per the principals orders. MC being embarrased asked the teacher did she know about all the people he helped and she confirmed it by that is why she asked for his help.

The door had opened and peaked in the popular girl of his class. Teacher looks happy and says we have our first customer, then the teacher looks in surprise and says I shouldnt really be happy about it. You must be in need and I am being happy about it, sorry.

Popular girl> Dont be teacher, I heard your whole conversation with MC. I wanted to wait till I could come in and not be interupting something. I do have a problem, I think my boyfriend is cheating on me.

Cuts to her sitting down in a chair facing both the teacher and MC sipping tea.

Popular girl> Thank you for the tea. As, I said I feel like my bf is cheating on me. I want to make sure its true before I confront him but I dont know where to go. I wouldnt have asked the MC since he was a woman chaser in middle school but since youre here teacher I could stand being in the same room as him for now.

Teacher> Now that's a little harsh. Do you know why he did it?

Popular girl> No but I dont really care right now as long he can show me I am being over reacting to what my bf is doing. I dont want to be those over bearing girlfriends that has an over active imagination of what my boyfriend isnt really doing. Only reason why I think it might be a possiblilty is that he only really talks and wants to date me in kind of cycles and not all the time. I know he has to deal with soccer club but these times where he is distant does not match up when he has tournaments or any other club activities. *Looks over at the teacher* My hope is something that I could find out like you did and at least talk to him about it.

MC> Is he at this school?

Popular girl>No, he goes to the school over in another town. We met when he had a match over here and we started going out then.

MC>Well, it looks like I'll be traveling a bit. I will find out what is going on.

Teacher talking to MC>Be sure to do your school work first and club activities after, I know you would neglect your needs to help someone so be careful.

Cuts to MC riding the train to the town and looking at his phone to see what the picture the popular girl just sent him and think to himself {she doesnt like me still, I can understand why but its not like we have to work together for long. I just wish she stops hating me so much. thats probably an impossible thing to ask. Oh well, lets get this over with so she will be happy again and not have to deal with me.}
Right when MC gets off he spots the guy in a restaurant with another guy and proceeds to get a seat at the restaurant near enough to hear the conversation.

The other guy>Why do you have to date that Popular Girl, she is not really that great of a person. Why dont you just dump her and find someone else?

The BF> I just keep her around just have someone when ever no one is available. She wouldnt think of breaking up with me. She has to keep up appearances because she's the popular girl at her school. It just makes it easy to keep her on a leash for whenever I want to see her.

The other guy>Geeze, I hope you know what youre doing. If one of the girls ever finds out you have three other girls that youre dating instead of them, you'll be in a heap of trouble and none of them would be with you.

The BF> Dont worry, thats why I make sure I only date them in their towns. It's a pain sometimes but non of them will find out about each other because of that.

At that point the waitress comes to the MC table and gives him and drink. As he taking a sip he has a concerned look on his face.

Cut to MC up on the roof with the Popular girl.

MC> I hate to break this to you but your boyfriend is cheating on you or more like he doesnt really think you as a girlfriend more like a every so often fling. I wish I didnt have to tell you this and rather it be something else but it sounds like he has about 4 girls he goes out with whenever he likes.

Popular girl, looks like she is very annoyed> Figures you would say anything, I knew it was a mistake to go with you. I bet you are doing this just to get back at me from blowing off your confession, if you even call it that, back in middle school. I had to deal with rebuilding my image because of you. I bet you dont know even who he's going out with other than me.< She now has a smug face thinking she just ruined MC's plan.

MC, looking like he is hurt> Middle school doesnt matter to me anymore and it really shouldnt to you. You dont know why I was asking you or anyone and you probably dont care. So you want proof. I know he is going to go out with one of the girls *says her name* this weekend. If you want, both of us meet up at the station near by where they are meeting and you can see for yourself. Before you think I'm trying to make this a date, I dont particularly want to do this since it would hurt you to see but you dont believe me and I rather make sure the other girls that he is dating know what he is doing. This is more for my hatred fro what that guy is doing than for you at this point because I cant really figure out how to get you to not to hate me.

This point the MC goes to the stairs and the popular girl is still looking at where he exited.

Popular girl>Why would he care at all for girls that he doesnt even know? I bet he thinks he might get with one. He's one to talk about being with too many girls. Trying to ask everyone out during middle school the idiot.

Cut to the station where MC is waiting for Popular girl. She comes up in casual clothes looking annoyed.

Popular girl> I hope you didnt make me come all the way out here on a chase just to date me. I didnt even dress up for this as well.

MC, starting to look annoyed> I wish you stop berating me. This is for your own good and the good for everyone else this guy tricked. I just want to get this done now so you dont have to deal with me since it looks like you are in pain just being near me. At least you didnt dress to be recognized, it makes it easier to watch your bf without him to spot you. < He starts to walk away at this point.

Popular girl>Geeze, you probably want to just get with one of the girls he is cheating on me. You shouldnt be talking all high and mighty when you think just like him.

MC grabs her hand and pulls her off to a side area out of the main foot traffic area. > Dont you ever say that about me, you dont know me and you really dont care. At this point I'm tempted to turn around and leave and let you just talk to him yourself if you could find him in time. Or just wait here till he comes, either way if you want to know be silent and follow me.

Popular girl looking surprised that the MC talked down to her> Okay, lead on.

Cut to the point of the meetup of the BF and the other girl. We see he is arguing with the other girl about something when the MC and popular girl comes up. They move off out of easy site but close enough to hear what the two are talking about. Popular girl has her hand on her chest and covering her mouth because now she hears that yes MC was right about she was being cheated on and she cant believe it. MC is now just watching the confrontation because it looks like its going south.

BF> Why wont you kiss me? I thought you wanted to date me? Dont you like me at all and you read some of those ecchi novels so you do want to do what you read.

Book girl, she has her hair around her face trying to cover up a lot but still can see out of it. Has small oval shaped glasses. > I like you but I'm embarrased to kiss you in public. I just cant. My heart is about to explode. Please lets go somewhere to let me calm down.

BF now looking annoyed > You said last time that we would kiss. I was hoping you show me you like me. Why is it so hard to show people that you like them? Are just playing with my emotions?

Book girl> No no its not that, I dont feel comfortable with a lot of people around me. I need to calm down please, youre not helping. Lets just find a bench.

BF now looking angry> You will kiss me when I want you to, youre my girlfriend! < He grabs her arm to pull her closer and she slaps him in response

Book girl> I dont like this, please let me go!

BF now just slaps Book girl.

Cuts to MC's face where its shadowed to his chin. Popular girl looking angry was bout to move foward to confront BF was cut off by MC holding his arm out.

MC in a growly voice> I'll deal with this. Please dont interfier, I dont want to see you hurt as well.
Popular girl now looking worried and doesnt know what to do now.

MC now running up to the BF with a fist raised> Fe Fi Fo Fum, I smell the shit of one made of Scum!! <Fist lands right when MC yells out scum. BF loosing grip on Book girl falls back. Book girl now scared and backs up a bit.

MC to BF> You and anyone like you make me sick. You say you love girls only to get into bed with them. You manipulate and force them to do whatever you want and just dispose of them like if they are toys. And whats worse, you hit who ever doesnt go with what you want. I will make sure you wont be able to do that.

BF> Your the looser that confessed to all the girls middle school. What do you know about love or anything? Youre the same as me. < BF was fighting MC and hit MC a few times and MC lands a few punches back.

MC grabbing the BFs arm> You dont know why I did that and I AM NOT ANYTHING LIKE YOU! <Proceeds to break the arm that BF had used to slap Book girl.
       now with tears in his eyes> Never ever say I'm like you, I am nothing like you. I did it to know what love was about, I still dont know probably never will. I just want to make sure now no one else feels like that way so I make sure they find it. That's why I'm in the Broken Hearts Club! I hit you because you were playing with Popular girls heart and broke your arm for the girl you struck.

Popular girl ran up and grabs MC's arm to try to get him out from there but also she is crying the fact that even though she hated the MC and showed it, he was still trying to help her. At that point, police showed up because there was a fight reported.

Cut to the school where a bunch of girls were talking in a group with the rumor of the MC fighting someone and breaking both the guys arms. The rumor mill is that MC will be Expelled and good riddance to him. He is a delinquent and deserves everything to him. Pan to the wall Popular girl is standing against looking grim. Cuts to where the Popular girl is in the falcuty room with the Teacher.

Teacher> Geeze, you shouldnt have let him go after your ex. It took both you and the girl to convince police not to press charges on him. He still has a suspension for breaking the guys arm but at least you could have stopped him after he hit the guy. I dont deny I personally think the guy deserves more but why did the MC just go crazy I wonder?


Popular girl looking uncomfortable> Well, both the ex and I had said he was just a playboy for asking all the girls out during his second year in middle school and we told him not to be all high and mighty while doing the same as my ex. He said he was the same as the MC and I think that was partly why MC broke the guys arm.

Teacher> Well I found this out when I was talking to him just before you came around for help. Dont tell him I told you, he rather not have anyone know but I had to know for safety and for his health. During the summer and start of his second year in middle school, his parents were divorcing and he was told he couldnt help since he didnt know what they were going through. I think his mom told him he didnt know the kind of love that she and his dad had for each other and why they are divorcing. So being the caring son, he wanted to find out what the love is and try to get them back together and be happy about it. So he started to confess to the girls that he liked and just kept going in desperation to get his parents back together. At the end of the year, as you have seen, he was shunned by everyone and looked horrible. My sister was the counselor at that school and talked to him about it. She told me recently just because I have him in my class just in case something pops up.

I figured to do the Relationship Help Club in order for him to help out people with their relationships. It seems like he feels better about himself doing it since he believes he's the sole reason why his parents divorced and that he failed to get them back together.


Popular girl looking upset> So he destroyed his reputation just to try to help his parents and I was tearing him down by comparing him to that aweful person. <starts crying> Why, why would he keep helping even though I was horrible to him? He was willing to hit someone for me even though I was berating him about how he was just a playboy.

Teacher, grabing the girls head into her chest and comforting her> It's ok, dont beat yourself up over it. I think he understands that you didnt like him but if you truly want to tell him your sorry and thank him he is coming back to school tomorrow. I got his suspension reduced because of the circumstance but I cant do this much more. I do need someone to help him as well. I can only do so much as a teacher. He doesnt have any friends since middle school and I think you could help with that.


Cut to MC's house (the one that is the classic inn style)

The MC is laying down on the floor reading a magazine looking bored. At this point he is thinking to himself that miss Popular girl probably is now really afraid of him and worse now the whole school is really going to treat him as an outsider. Hopefully he can make it to the end of High School without any occurrence near as bad as the one with PG's ex. At least it looked like both Book girl and PG were going to do better. Why did I go overboard... Probably it was both PG and her ex that brought me over the edge and was remembering the whole exchange and figured out it was when the ex had slapped Book girl over nothing thats what brought him over the edge.
At that point the you hear a door being knocked on and opening with his mother surprised that there's a young lady asking for MC. The mother comes to tell MC that she had put the girl in a room to wait if the MC wanted to talk to her. MC is wondering who it was goes to the room finding out it was PG with a bag on the table in front of her while she is sipping tea.

PG> Didnt know you lived here. I had to ask the teacher where you lived. I convinced her that I wouldnt wait till school to apologize and say thank you. I didnt know why you did what you did back then but I was told it was for something good and was left at that. If you want to tell me why, you can. I want you to trust me even though I was horrible to you. Thank you for punching that creep for me, it would have looked bad for me to have done so.

MC taken aback that PG was being nice to him> I thought you wouldnt want to do anything more with me. I figured you hated me and after that fight thought I was just a delinquent.

PG> Why would I think that< She looks away> no one has ever really stood up for me before. It was kinda nice to feel not just picture in a magazine just too look at. <pushes bag across the table> Here, this is a gift for all the trouble, its a cake. I dont really know what you like for cake or anything for that matter.... I would like to know more about the only person who would stand up for me.

MC now in shock> Wouldn't your reputation nosedive just for hanging out with me? I thought you were worried about that? Please, dont force yourself to be nice if you don't want to.

PG now miffed> I dont care about my reputation anymore! It got me with a guy who didnt really care for me and a group of people that say they're my friends but really are there just to suck up so they could be higher up on the social food chain!

MC> Well, I cant argue with your choice. I just want to make sure you're sure you understand that would happen. I don't want anyone to get hurt around me. < Pulls out the object out of the bag with a good luck and love charm tied together on a phone strap.

PG> Why are you so nice? You dont have to answer me. I figured at this point you are a good luck charm for others and need one for yourself. You havent had a really nice life and I just wish you would have better luck in the future. <She gets up and leaves>

MC is now holding the charms in his hand looking a little happier.

MC's mom enters the doorway and leans against the door frame> I had hope she was your girlfriend. You shouldn't let her go, she seems to like you. < she moves to walk out> Never let anyone go, please for my sake.

End Credits

Post credits scene: We see PG and MC in the club and then a girl peek in glasses >Curiouser and curiouser.
A second girl looks in and cuts to a bit of her face and see's its Book girl.

Spoiler: The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club EP 03 (click to show/hide)

Opening scene starts out in the homeroom, the PG is looking over at MC's empty desk and then it pans over to the teacher noticing as well.

Queue opening theme
The scene starts at the faculty room with PG sitting with homeroom teacher.

Teacher> I see you noticed that he hasn't come to school the past week. I am worried about why he is not coming as well. The note from his mother says he's not feeling well but I never seen him off more than a day. He's not the sickly type. Did you two have a fight or something?

PG> No, he was very nice... even more than normal. He was being extremely formal to the point where it was annoying me. I told him that I was sorry and everything but it's like he has not gotten over the fact that I was mad at him for being a playboy even though I know better now. I just wish he would be normal and just accept that I am being nice to him!

Teacher, sighs a bit> It's probably not that easy for him to fully open up again. He was burned not by the girls that let him down but by the fact that he felt that he was probably the reason why his parents broke up and that he could not do anything to help. It's almost like he had made his own emotional Iron Maidon to keep from hurting any one else. Have you tried to at least talk to him?

PG> Yes and he wont respond to email and when I went to his house his mother says that he is not okay with seeing people right now and I need to give him time. I wonder if it was about the fight he had with my ex that is bothering him?

Teacher> Dont try to go to his house too much right now. I understand you do care for him now and want him to feel better about himself but he will clam up if you are too pushy with him. I know, I tried. He is very afraid of hurting others just by being around them. That's probably why he never really tried to make up with any of his friends at that point. I tried to get him to a counselor but they had the same problem with him just walling them off and saying nothing. At that point, I decided if he was able to do the school work and not cause too much of a problem it would be best to let time to heal but the one thing that helped the most was having people come to ask him to help with their relationships. I thought it was a little ridiculous at first to ask someone who never had one but if you are desperate enough you would ask anyone.
       Turns out he was good and it was good for him to do that. The reason why I started the club because of the principal had to put a stop from having strangers just to come into the school. I found out that school rules allowed clubs to do community help and his fits perfectly. I was happy when you joined because now he was interacting with someone other than me at school and it was with someone he helped. Now he's just boarded up in his room and we dont know why. I have a guess but I rather know before you go talk to him again.

PG> How do you know that I worry about him, it's not like I like him in that way or anything. I feel sorry for what he's gone through and never had anyone to hold on to. I've seen a friend that went through the same and I was able to help her just by letting her cry her heart out on me. Some times its the little things that help and if you have no one or in his case just dont know what to do, it turns out worse for them.

Teacher> Well, just be patient with him and if you really want to at least find out what is bothering him so much that he's missing this much school. I will be delivering his schoolwork today to hopefully get to talk to his mother.

Cut to PG saying thank you to the Teacher and closing the door from inside the classroom and going to the window looking out. Still has a very concerned look to her face. Thinking {What is bothering you so much that you completely shut down? Is it because I started to become nice to you? At first I did hat you because I thought you just wanted to date anyone that would date you. Now I wish to tell you I understand what you went through. }

Science girl slowly slides open and closes the door letting the small shutting noise to get PG's attention.

PG, turning around startled > When did you come in?! You know it's polite to knock before entering.

Science girl> That is true but you looked lost in thought and I personally don't like to interrupt someone either speaking or thinking but if you must sorry for my intrusion. I heard that MC has missed a week of school? Since you are his only friend, I wanted to know why.

PG> First, I dont think he feels like I'm a friend. He hasn't exchanged emails or phone numbers. He is very formal around me and really doesn't open up. I think I know why but I dont really want to pry into his life because I think he would alienate himself just like right now. Why do you care? I know you didn't come from our school and you've been known to not care about the coming and going of the social standing in school. What made you care about him at all?

Science girl> You are correct that I just dismiss the whole social order thing as a waste of time for myself but there's people out there that use it for their entertainment. Why am I interested in what MC is doing actually starts from when he was a first year in High School. I sorta ran into him, more like saw that he was talking to a couple of adults and shadowed them just to see whats going on. Even with me not caring about the whole social scene of the school, I still know the fact that he is very unpopular with everyone. He's the ultimate outcast of the school and there he was talking to two adults that were grateful for his help in patching things up in their relationship. After that, you could have said his situation become an obsession as this didn't make sense why he's so hated by the school but is loved by many of the adults in the area. I found out the situation with him in middle school the best I can but still there's huge gaps and inconsistencies in what is said what happened to make him to not be liked. I never liked to find problems that I cant figure out and he's the best riddle I've come across in my life so far.

Pg now looking annoyed> You know that not everyone could be an experiment or a toy for your enjoyment. Best I can tell, he did what he did out of love and fear and wasnt thinking about himself. He's a very kind person that is probably more selfless than he should be. I think that he doesn't see himself as being worthy of any bodies time and he should just disappear , which he is trying to do so now. I should have known that you were not really concerned about him more than just as a puzzle that you cant crack in a day.

Science girl looking a little hurt> Sorry for that, I didnt know you cared about him that much. I know him less than you but I do care more than a puzzle. I thought you were just being nice to him because he made it to where you didnt loose face to your now ex boyfriend and not anything more than that.

PG> He did worry about my social standing would suffer if I started hanging out with him but I kinda got tired of dealing with finding out what's the latest fashions that were popular with the other girls and all the back talk they do. It's actually freeing and I do thank him for helping me out. Now I am worried that he's going to try to kill himself because he never had anyone for so long that was his age be nice to him.

Science girl suddenly smirking > I think you know more to his situation than you let on. I wont pry more but I do want to help. I dont like to see people hurt, especially him. I... <She looks away for a second but then faces PG> I think I might be able to help. He doesnt know me and I could deliver his school work that he needs. He talks to strangers better than people that know him and I know he hasn't seen me outside of school so I could fool him.

The scene pans out to a far shot of the school through the later half of the sentence.



 

Spoiler: The second Idea Title will be Subverting Expectations backstory/character names (click to show/hide)

 It will be about the main character being able to somehow manipulate all forms of media by "diving" into the story and changing it to his will. There will be levels of interference he could do but they all come at a cost. He is driven by his want of a better story in most modern media. He is tired of the subverting expectations fad that is going on within the media sphere and wants to have some fun with it.

Spoiler: Subverting Expectations EP 01 (click to show/hide)

 
The first scene is where we will see the MC standing in front of an appliance store with a few television screens facing the window and he is sweating while breathing heavily as he thinks did that just happen?! People are looking at him confused why did he suddenly show up there while there was someone that was on the televisions that looked just like him.

^VHS pause screen, and narration of the MC is "Well to be cliche, that is the start of my new life. I never expected it was possible but it was the cause of my death and life." Cue Opening Song^

Scene starts with the typical school start and MC is getting ready for lunch while his best friend sits down opposite of the desk from him.
MC> Last nights anime episode was complete bullshit and the new director just wants the other romance interest to win the shows mc! Why do people mess with a good show and not try to create horrible plot twists that are horrible for the show and the industry. < as he stabs his food with his utensils.

Friend> Not so loud man, people will think youre an otaku. Not many people would be that passionate about a series. Seriously dude, I thought you said you wouldn't get so involved with an anime and here you are looking like you are trying to stab your food as if it's the director.

MC> I just hate bad writing and people egos getting in the way of the story. If you dont like the way that the story is going isnt an excuse to shove your garbage into it. Either make your own series or just make fan fiction. 

[SquatchHammer]

Looks like there's no replies yet... Oh well.

Update. I had sorted out episodes in their own spoiler sections and start working on character names/backstories and the world building of the two shows so far. I might look into script writing or at least maybe a better way to make it easier for people to read.

[Naturegirl1999]

These look good

[SquatchHammer]

Yay, Episode 2 for The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club is up. I will go back and clean up Episode 1. I am having a problem with thinking of getting the first episode for the second series fleshed out so I might go and start taking a notebook around to write out stuff and put it online.

[SquatchHammer]

Apparently I cant fully put EP 3 fully up in the main page now. I will have to find a free word press site or just save screen shots to Imgur so people could read it.

Spoiler: The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club EP 03 (click to show/hide)

Opening scene starts out in the homeroom, the PG is looking over at MC's empty desk and then it pans over to the teacher noticing as well.

Queue opening theme
The scene starts at the faculty room with PG sitting with homeroom teacher.

Teacher> I see you noticed that he hasn't come to school the past week. I am worried about why he is not coming as well. The note from his mother says he's not feeling well but I never seen him off more than a day. He's not the sickly type. Did you two have a fight or something?

PG> No, he was very nice... even more than normal. He was being extremely formal to the point where it was annoying me. I told him that I was sorry and everything but it's like he has not gotten over the fact that I was mad at him for being a playboy even though I know better now. I just wish he would be normal and just accept that I am being nice to him!

Teacher, sighs a bit> It's probably not that easy for him to fully open up again. He was burned not by the girls that let him down but by the fact that he felt that he was probably the reason why his parents broke up and that he could not do anything to help. It's almost like he had made his own emotional Iron Maidon to keep from hurting any one else. Have you tried to at least talk to him?

PG> Yes and he wont respond to email and when I went to his house his mother says that he is not okay with seeing people right now and I need to give him time. I wonder if it was about the fight he had with my ex that is bothering him?

Teacher> Dont try to go to his house too much right now. I understand you do care for him now and want him to feel better about himself but he will clam up if you are too pushy with him. I know, I tried. He is very afraid of hurting others just by being around them. That's probably why he never really tried to make up with any of his friends at that point. I tried to get him to a counselor but they had the same problem with him just walling them off and saying nothing. At that point, I decided if he was able to do the school work and not cause too much of a problem it would be best to let time to heal but the one thing that helped the most was having people come to ask him to help with their relationships. I thought it was a little ridiculous at first to ask someone who never had one but if you are desperate enough you would ask anyone.
       Turns out he was good and it was good for him to do that. The reason why I started the club because of the principal had to put a stop from having strangers just to come into the school. I found out that school rules allowed clubs to do community help and his fits perfectly. I was happy when you joined because now he was interacting with someone other than me at school and it was with someone he helped. Now he's just boarded up in his room and we dont know why. I have a guess but I rather know before you go talk to him again.

PG> How do you know that I worry about him, it's not like I like him in that way or anything. I feel sorry for what he's gone through and never had anyone to hold on to. I've seen a friend that went through the same and I was able to help her just by letting her cry her heart out on me. Some times its the little things that help and if you have no one or in his case just dont know what to do, it turns out worse for them.

Teacher> Well, just be patient with him and if you really want to at least find out what is bothering him so much that he's missing this much school. I will be delivering his schoolwork today to hopefully get to talk to his mother.

Cut to PG saying thank you to the Teacher and closing the door from inside the classroom and going to the window looking out. Still has a very concerned look to her face. Thinking {What is bothering you so much that you completely shut down? Is it because I started to become nice to you? At first I did hat you because I thought you just wanted to date anyone that would date you. Now I wish to tell you I understand what you went through. }

Science girl slowly slides open and closes the door letting the small shutting noise to get PG's attention.

PG, turning around startled > When did you come in?! You know it's polite to knock before entering.

Science girl> That is true but you looked lost in thought and I personally don't like to interrupt someone either speaking or thinking but if you must sorry for my intrusion. I heard that MC has missed a week of school? Since you are his only friend, I wanted to know why.

PG> First, I dont think he feels like I'm a friend. He hasn't exchanged emails or phone numbers. He is very formal around me and really doesn't open up. I think I know why but I dont really want to pry into his life because I think he would alienate himself just like right now. Why do you care? I know you didn't come from our school and you've been known to not care about the coming and going of the social standing in school. What made you care about him at all?

Science girl> You are correct that I just dismiss the whole social order thing as a waste of time for myself but there's people out there that use it for their entertainment. Why am I interested in what MC is doing actually starts from when he was a first year in High School. I sorta ran into him, more like saw that he was talking to a couple of adults and shadowed them just to see whats going on. Even with me not caring about the whole social scene of the school, I still know the fact that he is very unpopular with everyone. He's the ultimate outcast of the school and there he was talking to two adults that were grateful for his help in patching things up in their relationship. After that, you could have said his situation become an obsession as this didn't make sense why he's so hated by the school but is loved by many of the adults in the area. I found out the situation with him in middle school the best I can but still there's huge gaps and inconsistencies in what is said what happened to make him to not be liked. I never liked to find problems that I cant figure out and he's the best riddle I've come across in my life so far.

Pg now looking annoyed> You know that not everyone could be an experiment or a toy for your enjoyment. Best I can tell, he did what he did out of love and fear and wasnt thinking about himself. He's a very kind person that is probably more selfless than he should be. I think that he doesn't see himself as being worthy of any bodies time and he should just disappear , which he is trying to do so now. I should have known that you were not really concerned about him more than just as a puzzle that you cant crack in a day.

Science girl looking a little hurt> Sorry for that, I didnt know you cared about him that much. I know him less than you but I do care more than a puzzle. I thought you were just being nice to him because he made it to where you didnt loose face to your now ex boyfriend and not anything more than that.

PG> He did worry about my social standing would suffer if I started hanging out with him but I kinda got tired of dealing with finding out what's the latest fashions that were popular with the other girls and all the back talk they do. It's actually freeing and I do thank him for helping me out. Now I am worried that he's going to try to kill himself because he never had anyone for so long that was his age be nice to him.

Science girl suddenly smirking > I think you know more to his situation than you let on. I wont pry more but I do want to help. I dont like to see people hurt, especially him. I... <She looks away for a second but then faces PG> I think I might be able to help. He doesnt know me and I could deliver his school work that he needs. He talks to strangers better than people that know him and I know he hasn't seen me outside of school so I could fool him.

The scene pans out to a far shot of the school through the later half of the sentence.

Start of the scene is in a park nearby the MC's home with the two girls looking at each other.

SG> You'll have to wait here. I don't want to spook him by seeing you with me. I'll message you when I'm done.

PG> Please at least let me talk to him if you can. Also, our homeroom teacher had called ahead so at least the mother knows that you should be there.

SG> I'll try, I cant guarentee if he would talk to you today but I hope at least figure out what is bothering him so much. Hopefully we could get him to come back to school.

We leave with science girl walking out of the park to the MC's house. She knocks on the door and MC's mom comes to the entrance with the obvious signs that she is drinking of late.

MC's Mom> The school had called ahead telling me that someone would come by to drop off some work for my son and to check up on him. Please come in.

SG> Thank you. I hope I'm not intruding at a bad time.

MC's Mom> No, not really. It's just been a week since he just shut down saying "She is only hanging out with me because she probably fears me." I hope thats not the case since she was nice and it looked like she cared for him. I still hate the fact he got in a fight but I understand and appreciate what he was fighting against. I just dont want him to be arrested though. <she now looks down and looks away and thinks {I cant be alone anymore if he does go}

They proceed to walk towards MC's room.

SG> From what I heard it was the heat of the moment got to him. I've seen him more collected at school to the point where if I didn't know he was in high school, I would consider him a college student.

They had arrived in front of his door with a plaque nailed to the wall with his first name. MC's Mother had knocked on the door.

MC's mother> Someone had arrived from school to give you the work from your classes and to at least check up on you. Could you please let them into your room that's all I ask you to do. You dont have to be afraid dear. <Looks over to SG> He's been afraid to see anyone from school but he has helped me with the hotel guests this past week. So I do thank him. Right now we have no one so he just stays in there as much as possible. If he opens his door, I will leave you two alone. If you want to leave just go back down the hall to the right and you'll see the entrance.

MC's door opens which shocks the mother but she only shows it by her eyes widening just a little bit.

SG bowing towards the mother as the door opens> Thank you very much maim, I hope we see each otgher soon. < Proceeds to face the opening door to see MC clean but definitely looking downwards and away from SG.

MC> You may come in. <Directs SG into the room but keeping the door wide open. He gestures to his seat in front of his desk > You may sit there if you feel like it. I hope you will not be offended if I dont offer you tea. I dont expect you to want to stay long. They probably told you I was a violent delinquent and shouldn't be trusted.

SG while listening to MC is looking around the room. Other than the desk and bed, every wall filled with shelves that's not filled with books except for one that's directly opposite of MC's bed where his pillows are. There's a picture with a few ordinary items on it but encased in protective acrylic boxes. In the picture you see an American next to MC's mother and a 5 year old MC. Both the farther and son are grinning ear to ear and the mother is smiling. SG is shocked to see the picture and MC quickly got up and places it face down on the shelf.

MC> Sorry, I didnt know I would have visitors in my room. I would have cleaned up but I've been busy helping my mother. So I heard you had some work for me to do?

SG looking at the immaculate room {I bet there's not even a spec of dust in here, why does he think its dirty?} > Yes I do and I also was asked to know why you missed school for a week. From what it sounds, your mother didnt really need you for the week. Yes, it did help having another hand but you need to make sure your grades dont slip from missing your classes. What is the problem at school that's making you not want to go. I understand most students just want to have fun but normally they would come in even though they dont want to.

MC> Didnt you hear? I'm a violent delinquent. I got in a fight with the start basketball player from another town over a girl. I've been shunned before but now even most of the teachers look at me weird. I'm surprised that Homeroom Teacher is still concerned with me. I thought they would have just abandoned any hope for me. I am surprised that you havent bolted when I got up quickly. Why.... do you not fear me or look at me in disgust? Everyone does it now and I deserve it. I am not the pretty boy that girls fall for or the popular guy that inspires his fellow students to do well.... I'm just a horrible person. Maybe I shouldnt be around anymore, I probably hurt my mother just by exsi...

MC couldnt finish with what he was saying because SG had came up to him and pressed his forehead to her chest. She's in tears looking both hurt and angry.

SG> Dont think that. Yes, you made some mistakes but you have done more good than anyone knows. If anyone only judges you on those mistakes doesnt even deserve to know who you are. Let them toil in their mess and look at the brightness that you are. You helped out so many people find and rekindle love, dont you forget that. You had helped my parents stay together!! I wont let you disappear because there's still people that need you. < She finally lets go of his head and grabs his shoulder one hand and lifts his chin up to face her. > You are a rarity in a bland world and there's people that would be devastated to know that you are hurting like you are. So please come back to school. PG says it's lonely without you in the club. Homeroom teacher said when you genuinely smile is like seeing the sun after a typhoon and I missed seeing you in the halls. So please come back.

MC suddenly relaising who it was> Are you the president of the Science club? Why are you here? You never really care about being social... Wait, I helped your parent's? I dont exactly remember who they are exactly since there was a few that had children that asked me for help. Sorry for making everyone worry but I dont know if I could go back right now. I still am not really liked at school to the point where even if the teachers stand up to me just makes it harder on them. Everyone at school was saying the only reason why PG was hanging out with me since she was scared of me hurting her. I just had to leave to make sure she wont be scared to go back to her friends she rather hang out with. She was always nervous around me after the incident.

SG> I bet she'll tell you otherwise. Right now your homeroom teacher had spoken to the principal about the situation and they are going to try to calm down the sentiment. He doesnt like it but he rather help someone like you than a delinquent.

MC> Wait, the principal doesnt think I'm a delinquent? Well, I wont make any promises but I will try to come in. At least for HRT, PG, and you. I just hope my mom can handle me going back. I dont really want to have her overwhelmed with running the inn.

As MC was saying that his mother came into view of the doorway> I can handle the upcoming guests that had booked for next week. You do need to go back to school if you want to help me out with the inn.

SG> So I'm keeping your word to be in on Monday then so you could talk to PG about why she's nervous around you and not through rumors. <as she gets up to leave> If you need to talk, we are willing to hear you out. < You can hear her exit the home>

MC"s Mother> I do want you to know I still need you here, not to skip school but please dont run away. You are needed by more people than you know and probably understand. Please keep that in mind. <She walks up to hug her son> I was worried that you wouldnt come out of yourself. Please say something next time because I do love you and worry about you.

The scene fades out and moves to the park.

SG is walking into view of PG. Popular girl is remembering (in a flashback form ) the incident with her ex.

PG getting up suddenly holding her chest with her hand> What happened!? What is it because of anything I've done that made him not want to go back. I know it must be. <she starts to tear up looking like she's in pain>

SG grabbing PG's hands> Hold it and calm down. It wasnt exactly what you did. He was feeling like he was scaring you because everyone at school started to treat him like a delinquent when they found out about the fight. They made it sound to him that you were only scared into hanging out with him so he figured if he left then you wouldnt be scared to go back to your friends.

PG now looking outraged> I told him I wasnt going back to them because they only were really using me. I didnt really care when I wanted to be part of schools social nature. Now I really dont care. They can feed off of someone else. It's a release from that life because now I can choose what I want to do and not what's popular to them.

SG> Well he did say you looked nervous when you were hanging out with him at the club.

PG looking down and away> Well, I was but I dont know why. I was never nervous around anyone before. At first I thought I was scared of hurting him but that's not the whole reason. I just dont know.

SG now with a grin> Well, he's going to show up to school on Monday just to at least ask you why. He's going to be relieved that you actually like his company. There's one thing though. When I was in his room I saw a picture of what it looks like his family. I dont even see any signs of three people living there and there was ordinary stuff around it protected in clear collector boxes. Did his farther die?

PG> No, I dont think he's dead but it sounds like MC loves his farther and misses him though.

SG> I'll ask him when he's more comfortable around us.

PG looking surprised> What do you mean? You have your own club and you are not in the same class with both of us.

SG> There's only me in the science club at this point. I'm tired of being the only one there interested in science. I was told by the teacher if my club doesnt get enough people in soon I have to shut it down but he would allow me to be able to use the science room as long as I dont leave it dirty after using it. So would you be okay with me joining your club?

PG smiling> Well you have to ask MC but I think he would be okay with you there. If need be, I would stand up for you since you helped him out of his extreme depression. Let's get something before we go home. There was a sweet shop that just opened by the train terminal that looked good. <SG smiling nods her head as they head back to the train station.

Scene pans up to the afternoon sky to see it shifting to a bright blue sparse clouded sky morning. It pans down to the school as the students are walking in.

Scene cuts to the home room and then to the clock showing its only a couple of minutes away to class starting. At first we pan to PG looking concerned at MC's empty desk. The desk itself becomes the focal point of the scene to cut back to the teacher looking equally concerned. Then it moves to the back of teachers head to get a view of the classroom in murmured conversation. You hear snippets that the teacher might have an announcement because she was very early to class. Right before the bell rings you see MC just come into the classroom having a neutral look and sits down with the camera cutting at an angle to see both teacher and PG relieved that MC actually came in.

Teacher> MC, it's good to have you back. I hope you have the work made up from when you were gone?

MC> Yes I do <Starts to get up to hand it to the teacher but is surprised that PG walked up to his desk smiling>

PG> Let me give it to teacher okay? <She is genuinely smiling and looking happily at MC

MC  a little shocked at first but gives a little smile> If you insist.

Cut to credits.


 

[SquatchHammer]

Status update.

I was busy with work and then health problems popped up. Things are still not up to par but I am finally starting to get things back together. Sorry if it looked like I had abandoned this. I honestly want to complete both ideas really and doing the second one is harder than I had originally thought but I finally know how I want to do the details.

Spoiler: The Unofficial Broken Hearts Club Ep 04 (click to show/hide)

The start of the scene shows the outside of the club room with the club name sign put up and hear the voice of PG.

PG> What!? You are joining us?! I thought you were in the Science Club?!

Cut to the interior of the room.

SG> Yes and according to the club rules "Multiple clubs can occupy the same space if they are working together or at least have permission of the club in charge of that room." and are you okay with me watching how you work with relationship problems for our psychology portion of the Science Club.

MC> Well, I don't mind if you only observe but I have to ask our other member first. So PG how do you feel?

PG looking annoyed> I really don't like how you science freaks don't really believe in love and only put it with bio-chemical exchanges... I begrudgingly be alright as long as you keep your observations to yourself and not make clever quips to the people we are trying to help.

MC> Looks like we are okay with you staying with us. I have to agree with PG in this case, keep observations to yourself please. People have a hard enough time to talk to us and having someone making it sound like they are talking down to them makes it worse.

SG> Thank you for allowing me to stay with you two. I have a feeling that we are going to have fun together.

Queue Opening Theme

Start the scene with the outside of the faculty room.

HR Teacher> Thank you for coming and meeting with me. Would you mind doing a tour with a new student? I would ask someone else to do this but since you already met her before I figured she would be comfortable with you guiding her around.

MC looking a little surprised> I am glad I could help but I don't know who would I know coming to this school.

HR Teacher smiles> Well, it was when you were helping your soon to be friend, PG, that you met her. She was bullied a bit at her school due to the rumors of what happened and her parents transferred her to this school to hopefully get her in a better situation. BG, could you come over here now?

Book girl stands up from the waiting area and walks over to where the teacher is. Her eyes widen right when she sees MC.

MC turning around finally seeing who he would tour the school and looks a little hurt at first I hope she isn't afraid of me or this will be a very stressful tour for her.

MC Bows> Hello, I am MC and I wish we had met in better circumstances. I hope you have a wonderful experience here.

Teacher smacking MC on the back> You don't have to be so formal. I told her you were a nice guy and she is glad that you are here. She told me that she would be grateful if she met another guy like you here and not knowing you were going here made it so much better. Please help her around and don't worry I told PG and SG that you wont be making it to the club meeting today because of a favor I am asking you.

MC looking a little flustered but tries his best to compose himself and motions a hand towards the door> Would you like to join me on a tour of our beautiful school. I hope I can be helpful.

BG looking shyly at MC> Show me the way please.

Now the scene cuts back to the Club room. PG is currently reading while SG is writing in her notebook on a table with tea cups in front of both girls.

PG is sitting while tapping her heel aggressively

SG noticing the agitation> Why are you so energetic this afternoon?

PG>Why did the teacher only want MC to guide her around. It's been dead for a bit since the week that MC was stuck home hating himself and not talking to anyone. I would have liked to have at least been with him for it just in case the new girl asks him about something he doesnt know how to answer and throws him into another self guilt trip.

SG looking a little surprised> My my, you are being really protective of him of late. You scorn girls and guys making fun or rude comments of MC when he's not around and just glare at them when you are with him. Do you like him now? I heard you hated him about not confessing to you in middle school but I dont know if that was a rumor.

PG slams down the book in anger> No! No he did not. I hated him for a couple of years because of that but even though I hated him he still helped me out. Now the girl that was part of a situation that I was involved with is here and I dont know why I am so angry! It’s frustrating that I am upset with him being with another girl! <As she pounds her fists on the table, tears start coming from her eyes.> Why didnt he confessed to me first, he would not have any problems….

SG scoots over pats her back> What do you mean he not confess to you first? Why was he confessing to all the girls?

PG sighs {Do I tell her or not? I dont want to betray him but I cannot just blow it off why I was upset with him. I have to trust her. I need someone else to talk to.}

PG>Promise me on your life that you won’t tell anyone what I’m about to tell you. I can only trust you at this point and I dont want to hurt MC. I never really been able to talk to anyone about this, I loved MC. Yes, I was his childhood friend and I fell in love with him when he defended me against the girl that was bullying me. I didnt know that to do and he was there for me.

PG>I was told why he did what he did 4 years ago. His parents were getting divorced and at that point he wanted to figure out what love is to be able to get his parents back together. As you saw he didn’t find anyone and by the time he asked me, I hated him. I could not stand the sight of him because I thought he was just trying to get laid at that point. I was wrong and I am still angry that he didn’t talk to me about what was going on.

SG>I think it was him trying not to either burden you or hurt you. I have seen most guys not know that a girl likes him until she tells him. I don’t know exactly why but I think it’s because most guys are distracted and women tend to expect them to know what is going on without being told.

PG>I wasn't going to turn him down if he asked.

SG>He probably figured you would because you were childhood friends. I have seen quite a few guys get turned down by their childhood friends in trying to go into a deeper relationship with them and the other did not want to change the friendship in any way.

PG>MC is special to me, he is the only guy that would defend me against anyone without caring about himself even after what I've done. At this point most guys will approach me because they think I am secretly dating him and I am fine with that.

SG slightly smiles>So that means you are jealous of him being alone with another girl then even though he is doing the tour to help her?

PG looking a little peeved with her cheeks puff out> Yes, he should not be alone with anyone but me. I only was okay with you because I know you're not the type that easily falls for a guy, let alone like someone more than tolerable aquaintices.

SG sipping tea thinking {If only you knew more about how I had met him you would have been jealous of me being around him.}