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chaotic skies

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So I decided to write a story....
« on: November 11, 2016, 02:22:29 am »

It's a bit of a long story :P

Anyway, I've had this idea bouncing around in my head for a while. I'm not 100% sure on how this is going to pan out, or even if I'm going to continue it, but here I am at 1:21 in the morning, so it's a bit late to turn back now.

Here's the story

Feel free to read the little bit I've done so far, tell me what you think. Don't feel like you have to be nice about it either; I'm perfectly okay with you telling me it sucks if it sucks :P

I'll be back in 12 hours time, I'm taking a nap
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Re: So I decided to write a story....
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2016, 08:46:50 am »

AU stands for Astronomical Unit. The distance from the Earth to the sun. What is it about the significantly less massive Solid Gas Giant that requires kuiper belt distances?
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Re: So I decided to write a story....
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2016, 03:12:28 pm »

I'll look at it, I wrote most of that at like 1 am. Probably me not knowing what I'm doing.
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