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Story Duel
« on: April 04, 2016, 08:36:28 am »

Okay this is a writing fantasy game with 6-12 Players. We all play the hero but we participate in a duel with another writer. It would be set up like this:


Prestory -----> Duel between Player 1 and Player 2, in which each of them is writing a paragraph upon what happens next. Later on we might decide to introduce thematic setting paragraphs. After each player has send in his side of the story the players and non-players may vote upon a paragraph. While writing a paragraph you control the setting and the player. Please refrain from involving rape and any other non-suitable material. Thank you.

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Coolrune206



Prestory:
You find yourself trapped in a dungeon cell. You don't know how you got here, nor why you could be here. You grab your feminine bosom in fear as you hear footsteps aproaching your door. You hear keys dangling before the cell door, you look towards the door.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2016, 08:36:50 am »

Reserved for stuff...
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2016, 09:28:36 am »

So if I understand, now two players would post about what happens next, and then everyone else votes on it?
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2016, 09:39:45 am »

Exactly. We will see where this leads.
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Rule Addition: Winner of the duel will receive a point. If you have five points you may participate in a setting paragraph session.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2016, 09:56:47 am »

A small curious creature stands outside the cell, holding a rusted key on an equally oxidized key-ring. He seems gleeful as he shakes it. He makes a few guttural speaking noises, then looks at you as if awaiting a response. When he realizes that you cannot understand him, his dirty eyebrows come down like thunder into a scowl. He grumbles, and you hear clinking and clicking noises. Shortly after, the door opens. Now, with the creature in full view, you can see that it is clearly a kobold. It holds a small plate of what can only be described as slime. It leaves the door open as it enters your cell and plops the slimy mess down. It makes a satisfied noise when the meal is presented to you, and looks at you expectantly. When you make no move to consume the horrid meal, it pantomimes eating. The cell door is still open.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2016, 09:37:34 am »

Bumpedy
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2016, 07:02:07 am »

You can't see out of the cell, too much smoke. In fact, you can't see anything but the smoke, and non of it seems to be able to get into your cell. Whoever is outside the cell seems to be muttering something about magic locks, and they are also trying to bash down the cell door. Quickly checking the cell, you see only stone walls, no smoke or anything. Seeing as there is nothing for you too do but wait, you do just that.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2016, 12:07:41 pm »

So the Duel is:
Impcamper vs Coolrune 206
A small curious creature stands outside the cell, holding a rusted key on an equally oxidized key-ring. He seems gleeful as he shakes it. He makes a few guttural speaking noises, then looks at you as if awaiting a response. When he realizes that you cannot understand him, his dirty eyebrows come down like thunder into a scowl. He grumbles, and you hear clinking and clicking noises. Shortly after, the door opens. Now, with the creature in full view, you can see that it is clearly a kobold. It holds a small plate of what can only be described as slime. It leaves the door open as it enters your cell and plops the slimy mess down. It makes a satisfied noise when the meal is presented to you, and looks at you expectantly. When you make no move to consume the horrid meal, it pantomimes eating. The cell door is still open.

You can't see out of the cell, too much smoke. In fact, you can't see anything but the smoke, and non of it seems to be able to get into your cell. Whoever is outside the cell seems to be muttering something about magic locks, and they are also trying to bash down the cell door. Quickly checking the cell, you see only stone walls, no smoke or anything. Seeing as there is nothing for you too do but wait, you do just that.


Please vote for one. Thank you!
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #8 on: April 22, 2016, 12:39:37 pm »

A small curious creature stands outside the cell, holding a rusted key on an equally oxidized key-ring. He seems gleeful as he shakes it. He makes a few guttural speaking noises, then looks at you as if awaiting a response. When he realizes that you cannot understand him, his dirty eyebrows come down like thunder into a scowl. He grumbles, and you hear clinking and clicking noises. Shortly after, the door opens. Now, with the creature in full view, you can see that it is clearly a kobold. It holds a small plate of what can only be described as slime. It leaves the door open as it enters your cell and plops the slimy mess down. It makes a satisfied noise when the meal is presented to you, and looks at you expectantly. When you make no move to consume the horrid meal, it pantomimes eating. The cell door is still open.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #9 on: April 22, 2016, 01:10:56 pm »

A small curious creature stands outside the cell, holding a rusted key on an equally oxidized key-ring. He seems gleeful as he shakes it. He makes a few guttural speaking noises, then looks at you as if awaiting a response. When he realizes that you cannot understand him, his dirty eyebrows come down like thunder into a scowl. He grumbles, and you hear clinking and clicking noises. Shortly after, the door opens. Now, with the creature in full view, you can see that it is clearly a kobold. It holds a small plate of what can only be described as slime. It leaves the door open as it enters your cell and plops the slimy mess down. It makes a satisfied noise when the meal is presented to you, and looks at you expectantly. When you make no move to consume the horrid meal, it pantomimes eating. The cell door is still open.
You know, being a judge makes me feel bad, because I wouldn't stand a chance against Coolrune! In fact, I have a thing or two to learn from him.

You can't see out of the cell, too much smoke. In fact, you can't see anything but the smoke, and non of it seems to be able to get into your cell. Whoever is outside the cell seems to be muttering something about magic locks, and they are also trying to bash down the cell door. Quickly checking the cell, you see only stone walls, no smoke or anything. Seeing as there is nothing for you too do but wait, you do just that.
Well, the other reason why I don't like being a judge: I have to say no to somebody. This isn't bad, but it goes nowhere close to Coolrune's paragraph.

And my vote goes to Coolrune206! What a surprise!

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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #10 on: April 22, 2016, 01:30:21 pm »

((Yay! My writing style is loved!))
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #11 on: April 23, 2016, 12:33:36 am »

Vote is closed in the next 10 hours.
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Re: Story Duel
« Reply #12 on: April 23, 2016, 04:14:20 am »

Not surprised at all.
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