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Author Topic: ☼Hexhaunt - Warlock tutorial/Story fort [MDF 34.11]☼  (Read 4202 times)

Splint

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Re: ☼Hexhaunt - Warlock tutorial/Story fort [MDF 34.11]☼
« Reply #15 on: October 21, 2015, 09:13:05 pm »

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Cross put a hand on his manservant's shoulder. “My friend, the risk of damage outweighs the possible benefits.” He smiled at the undead servant. “Just think of it, perhaps in an instant you could be an equal to any journeyman or master smith!
One of these is backwards?

Nope. The guy's a (former) nobleman, so he didn't think of what the benefit to his servant would be initially. It was kind of an "Oh shit, should have said something else. Quick Cross! Improvise! Say something that might sound good!" situation for his brain.

Working on another update, may or may not have it done before work tomorrow.

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Re: ☼Hexhaunt - Warlock tutorial/Story fort [MDF 34.11]☼
« Reply #16 on: October 21, 2015, 09:18:52 pm »

Might want to make it clearer that he's suddenly changing his opinions?
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Re: ☼Hexhaunt - Warlock tutorial/Story fort [MDF 34.11]☼
« Reply #17 on: October 22, 2015, 08:20:53 pm »

Might want to make it clearer that he's suddenly changing his opinions?

Not a change of opinion. It was an afterthought to try and get Donovan to be more receptive, since Donovan still has his self-awareness for story purposes.

Anyway, I  added a list of unclaimed warlocks, ghouls, and so on. Update will have to wait, as I got home pretty late tonight.
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