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Zanzetkuken The Great

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Critique my writing
« on: December 09, 2014, 08:36:05 pm »
Current Story I am working on.

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Yes, I realize both are fanfiction. This is just something I do occasionally on a whim, though any critique would be helpful to improve my writing when I wind up deciding to write.
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