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[Tiruin]

This is beautiful.

>.> and I don't know the context of any of these.

[Radio Controlled]

Is it possible to buy a exact copy of that Automatous Combat Drone?

I'd hazard a guess and say that thing is horribly outdated by now. 

[piecewise]

Is it possible to buy a exact copy of that Automatous Combat Drone?

You want a gunner bot that has problems understanding friend from foe, Civilian from Combatant, and knows no kill except overkill?

[Harry Baldman]

You want a gunner bot that has problems understanding friend from foe, Civilian from Combatant, and knows no kill except overkill?

Yeah, we have people for all that!

[Tavik Toth]

Is it possible to buy a exact copy of that Automatous Combat Drone?

You want a gunner bot that has problems understanding friend from foe, Civilian from Combatant, and knows no kill except overkill?

Yes. Several.

[Caellath]

Second the "really good job there piecewise" claims. It's very good worldbuilding stuff.

[smurfingtonthethird]

GLORIOUS FLUFF!

This is greaaaat.

[Parisbre56]

Found another one in 5597 info:

much more deserve

I believe that meant diverse.

In 7458 info: near the end of the second paragraph China needs a capital C.

In 8577 and 9587 description: first word of first sentence of the second paragraph (its) needs to be capital and with apostrophe (It's).

In 8745 info:

and whipped

I believe that meant wiped.

In 9587 info:

which sent in place

I think that meant set.

[syvarris]

I had actually been writing down where the typos were on my first read through.  I just stopped because I felt like a nitpicking jerk.  There's a lot that you missed, Paris. >.>

Piecewise, do you actually want us to try and find them?

[Parisbre56]

I'm sorry. I just wrote whatever I happened to notice while reading because I was trying to help. I didn't mean to insult piecewise nor was I actively trying to spot mistakes.

[piecewise]

I had actually been writing down where the typos were on my first read through.  I just stopped because I felt like a nitpicking jerk.  There's a lot that you missed, Paris. >.>

Piecewise, do you actually want us to try and find them?

If you want. There's probably gonna be a lot of wrong uses of "It's" in cabinet 1, because I made a mistake on one thing that got copy pasted a lot. That and I didn't really proof read this beyond a quick skim. I dunno if I'll actually get around to changing them though, unless there is a really bad section in there that is just unreadable.