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Author Topic: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.  (Read 2030 times)

Zavvnao

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A smaller-size world of many tiny islands, archipelagos and two sizable continents, set to 1 site per civ, with high secrets and high volcanoes.
Many of the races are from mods and my small changes, the biggest is the vilous mod, along with a few critters from the dragonic(spelt that way on purpose) civilizations mod, no civs form dragonic civs due to crash when mixed to much with vilous.

total pop for this world =
   101 Enocas = fish people, mercantile .
   1402 Nevreans = bird-like humanoids, smart and steam technology.
   2853 Northern sergals = the bigger, stronger, cannabalistic breed of sergal.
   4 Southern sergals = the smaller, faster, more diplomatic breed of sergal.
   2475 Humans = the oldie but goodie/filler Mary-sue race.
   1440 Elves = one of the most hated races of df
   1650 Talyxians = Cat-like humanoids, live close to nature but much, much more likeable than elves.

   Total: 9925

Spoiler: The Hero (click to show/hide)

The main adventurer is one of the last of the Southern Sergals on his world. And he is the only one of his civ, the other four are necromancers from  the start of time who probably have no idea they where the last of their species till I created my hero.

Sergals are Shark/dog-like chimeras who are from the continent of Vilous on an alien world. While both are strong and viscous, southern ones tend to be more omnivorous and intellectual, while northern ones tend to be very organized militarily and very expansionist.

Spoiler: The start (click to show/hide)

Start location:
Xugmunstrur, "Spiderdie", town
   Owner: The Hate of Eviscerators, southern sergals
   Parent Civ: The Ghoul of Relics, southern sergals
   general: Ashro Flutetouches, human
   182 humans
   9 elves
As you can see, our hero is basically a demi-god sent to save his species. the only reason I was able to do this as there are assimilated elves and humans that carry on the ways of his people.



So, everyone, I never did an adventure story like this before. I want to know if I should continue or not as I am new to this, just copying what all you great story-tellers inspired me to do.
« Last Edit: January 28, 2014, 02:19:11 pm by Zavvnao »
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Arnarinn

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Re: The last of hs kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of he South.
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2014, 05:43:15 am »

Definitely, this sound very interesting!
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of hs kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of he South.
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2014, 12:35:29 pm »

thank you. I will think what would be a god adventure.
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of hs kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of he South.
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2014, 02:15:11 pm »

9th of Malachite, 1069
Exploring the Town


Spoiler: what they are wearing (click to show/hide)
basic long, flowing robes.

Spoiler: elftown market (click to show/hide)
This seems to be the elf-neighborhood of town, all the elves and humans are dressed as southern sergals.

So while the elves have the lower class to themselves with a few unlucky humans, most of the humanoids in this town are either craftsman/women with stores to themselves, soldiers or:

Spoiler: the sage (click to show/hide)

Both Northern and Southern Sergals are Matriarchal. Also, she and my character are the two fattest beings in the room, I guess that means we are both the most important. But really, many of her advisers are so starved looking, that's a little greedy.
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2014, 11:21:10 am »

will post more latter.
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2014, 11:55:29 am »

Any particular quest I should try to do? maybe make an epic hero then make a few more to see if I can get a starting 7 of legendary heroes?
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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2014, 03:46:29 pm »

Any particular quest I should try to do? maybe make an epic hero then make a few more to see if I can get a starting 7 of legendary heroes?
Ditch the skirt.
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2014, 08:41:43 pm »


Ditch the skirt.

why? this isn't earth or human machismo :p
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blazing glory

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #8 on: February 06, 2014, 12:07:05 am »


Ditch the skirt.

why? this isn't earth or human machismo :p
Because this universe's version of a scot's man will have yer head on a pike because your character is calling a kilt a skirt
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #9 on: February 06, 2014, 01:04:35 am »

I see. I thought it was two separate things.
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blazing glory

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #10 on: February 06, 2014, 01:27:19 am »

I see. I thought it was two separate things.
Kinda a internet meme,kilts look like skirts and men wear kilts
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Zavvnao

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Re: The last of his kind. Xoslon Xunsmzotellare, Sergal of the South.
« Reply #11 on: February 06, 2014, 01:44:46 am »

I did not think about that. XD I was thinking, "ok, extra free armor till I get steel stuff in the palace.
Since the ruler is fat also like the character, I bet her armor would fit as well.
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