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[Grand Nagus]

Synopsis
(From nanowrimo)

The Pindari and Humans have lived together for centurys in peace and safety, but can this last much longer? will the two divide and engage in a horrific civil war? Will the Issue of robotic sentience destroy two differing races?
From the perspective of an unemployed dropout, a space age policeman and old age pensioners this momentus time in the history of humans and Pindari will unfold.
Dispirited by the world, Fred embarks in an adventure amongst a world of changing opinions, strife and social conflict. With the rise and fall of robotics in the human colony of Freetown, Fred discovers a new level of humanity under the most terrible conditions.

Read it here:
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Constructive criticism welcome!
I'm mostly just looking for comments on it, to see what you guys think. I believe this version is pre-several edits, so the grammar may(will) be off and/or parts changed. But this is the basic idea.

P.S. I'm not a professional writer(surprise!), or highly educated in literature, I'm a history student. I do this for fun, so judge with that in mind! However this doesn't mean you have to stroke my ego, I know i'm bad, I'm working improving!