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Author Topic: Dwarf Fortress Sketchbook  (Read 10622 times)

stickadtroja

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Re: Dwarf Fortress Sketchbook
« Reply #30 on: December 16, 2012, 04:14:28 pm »

very nice stuff!

in the last painting i really like the pose and the characters expression, but the whole piece is way to smudgy. maybe its beacuse your  are using an soft airbrush or something? try using a hard brush with the pen pressure set to the opacity and paint like you draw, corsshatching and such. the lighting could also use some work. right now the reflected light on the walls is as strong as the lightning itself, wich doesnt happen unless they are made of super reflective mirrors. try to tone down all the bounced light on the wall and put some more white in the middle of the lightning.

keep up the good work!
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