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Author Topic: a story that randomly came to me  (Read 1346 times)

Drago55577

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a story that randomly came to me
« on: March 08, 2012, 12:18:57 pm »

Fighters streaked overhead, engaged in endless battle. Flying through a dark red sky. Blizzard (the main char) was living up to his name, sending a storm of plasma bolts at an enemy Heavy Automatic Railgun turret, it was firing at the advancing forces including you. A soldier beside you explodes as rounds tear through his body at supersonic speeds and smashing into the ground behind tearing up the blackened land.

The war has gone on for eight-hundred and eleven years but is called the Millenia Long War.

You dive for cover, as small arms fire hit you but vaporise in your shielding. As one of the few soldiers of both races that have had their conciousness transferred into a full suit you survive much more, but you are the only one left, a legend among both species while the rest are just infused with weapons and armor, never expected to survive.

You feel blood spatter on your arm, you look over and the squad beside you was torn up my Inferno class aircraft, they have much more powerful shots then the Shard fighters but are slower to shoot. The two heavy plasma cannons in your back come out, charging up as you leap over the rock and fire at the railgun emplacement. The whole thing explodes killing 2 surrounding soldiers and heavily wounding another. As you walk up, he goes for a gun, but you quickly stomp his head in, covering your foot in brain matter and blood.

Upon a close look, their armor is more steampunk looking, while yours is streamlined and smooth.

You start walking, another railgun is in your way, but reinforced with tanks. Your reinforcements are stuck far behind fighting, your all alone, your final stand.

You charge up the twin plasma cannons again, while bringing your wrist mounted plasma guns or "Stormers" as they are commonly called for their fast rate of fire to full power. You say a few last words, then jump over firing everything. A plasma cannon shot strikes the railgun destroying it, but the other misses by far and hits the turret of a tank. The ground where you just were explodes as they fire everything at it. Your stormers take down infantry as they take down your shield and you dive in cover but not before a shot hits your shoulder and embeds itself causing mild pain even though its a machine, just with a conciousness. The ground all around you is torn up as shots go everywhere, trying to get a lucky hit. You bring the cannons up to full power as your shields come back, jump over and shoot the other tank, the small plasma shots completly melting the small turret and the plasma cannoms blowing up the sides. Another one out.


You look at your work, pleased at your destruction. You proceed towards the cliff face when someone who survived jumps out at you, bladd in hand. You would've died if it wasn't for the impecible timing of a Shard fighter, it left a flaming trail as it fell, slicing right through the enemy then crashing several meters away. You think to yourself 'another one dead, but for what? We have been fighting this war for so long...'

As you proceed towards the cliff, you see the size of a steampunk mech down below, their equivilent of you. You jump down only to be greeted by fire from Infernoes as the cliff starts to fall on you. The last thing you see is the whole squadron being torn apart by a flaming ship, crashing to the ground and causing the most brillient explosion you have ever seen.

Then darkness takes you over.






You wake up, the first thing you notice is the sky...its blue, birds chirping peaceful songs and flying about, or sitting in nests. Your light blue eyes fully actvate and then you see creatures standing in front of you, humanoid and small. You were probably about 4-5 heads higher than them. They didn't look hostile, just curious. You reach a hand out and say "friend", but to them ot was gibberish, but one seemed to understand, he reached his hand out, and said, "friend".
You put your hand on his head, a slight whiring noise was heard and you knew everything about this place, about humans, the year and the planet. Its been one hundred thousand years since the Millenia Long War, and it was peaceful, the ground was green, there was plant life. And you look back at him, and say "friend" in his language and they all relax.

After a while, one talks to you, seems like the leader "where are you from?" was all he said. You tell him everything, the war, the two species and your final moments. With that, you say goodbye to all of them and go on your way.

This is something that just came to me, first thing I have ever written so please tell me any problems.
« Last Edit: March 08, 2012, 12:25:11 pm by drago55577 »
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2012, 12:38:03 pm »

Sorry for double post, but if its good, should I make a suggestion game out of this?
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2012, 02:47:34 pm »

I suppose I should ask: What type of game are you imagining this as? Or have I misinterpreted, and this is actually a short story in the making?
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2012, 02:53:55 pm »

The game is in forum games and roleplayimg, this is the story I based it on.
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2012, 02:56:13 pm »

Ok I didn't know that, I'll have to check that out.
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #5 on: March 08, 2012, 04:04:52 pm »

Y u no post in writers's apprenticeship? God knows there needs to be more activity on it.
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2012, 04:13:15 pm »

In where? This is the first thing I have ever written.
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Re: a story that randomly came to me
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2012, 02:38:28 am »

Oh god I'm continuing it.(I'm going into third person now)

Blizzard walked through a dense forest, so far encountering nothing dangerous. But night was falling, and this plamet was something new to him. He continued to walk on, finnaly encountering a clearing at the side of a mountain. It was very tall, snow covered it half way and the rest was a light grey stone with strands of silver water running down from a hidden spring. Blzzard finnaly took in the sheer size of it, it rose over 2000 meters high, and many jagged cliffs lined it. But that didn't stop him, step after step he went up, hours passed until night finnaly hit. Blizzard surveyed the area for shelter, but all that came was a hollowed tree trunk, hollowed from years of decay.

Later, a fire made from dead wood was burning outside, while he was inside, his system going dormant as he fell asleep.





Blizzard awoke, alert. Wolves were howling and circling the tree, no normal wolves, claws that could tear you in two, their entire body size nearly as big as a car. A pack of five circled him, more probably hiding. He began to get up as one leaped at him, but missing as Blizzard jumped to the side, the wolf clawing the tree in half and getting its head stuck under the bits of wood. He looked around for any weapons, only a sharp piece of wood but it will do. Blizzard picked it up and stabbed it, jumping up into the air and hitting it's back, penetrating a lung as it slowly bled out. Another leaped before he could pick it up, biting the torso armor which thankfully didn't get penetrated. Blizzard to crush its head in with a punch, but it shakes him around, flinging him away as a small piece of his armor is torn of, just the size of a fist. He gets up as it leaps again, but prepared he brought his fist down shattering its skull as blood spattered on the ground below, more seeping out from its crushed head.

If someone wants me to continue more frequently I will. I just feel like writing.
« Last Edit: March 09, 2012, 02:43:40 am by drago55577 »
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